Telling Women's Lives

Revised Sentences-Luke Vith

1. Many readers criticized “In Praise of Brevity” for being biased.
2. This year ticket prices increased by $5, now ranging from $20 to $25.
3. It is essential she make all of her semesters at college productive.
4. There are few indoor areas on campus not occupied by students on rainy days.
5. The scene at the beginning is essential to understand the two different personalities in Gollum’s head.
6. Neighboring French dining restaurants in Seattle outshine Marcel’s Café.
7. Students with increased anxiety at exam time tend to cram words into sentences in hopes of impressing professors.